R3 Comics Right Place Right Time

 Kia ora blog readers! 
 In room 3 we are learning about being at the right place at the right time. Do you have any ideas?. But i'm still working on it with Darby and Zoe.

I am poem

I Am Poem

I am A  Wild horse

I Wonder what average expense is.

I Hear the vocalisation of further animals.

I see the sunset before me.

I want to be Free.

I am a unflinching horse.

I pretend I am brave.

I feel  the wind throughout my main.

I touch the tip of the grass with my hooves.

I worry no one will like me.

I cry because have no one to run with.

I am Not brave.

I understand I’m not brave.

I say I am safe.

I dream of friends.

I try to get friends.

I hope I am safe.

I am a Horse.

The 1st Page

The 1st Page 

Hi, my name is Lizzy I Have one older sister called Alexandra. I went to my grandmother's house without Alexandra because of something urgent. I wondered of all the reasons why grandma would need me but I knew that it would be for a good cause. 

I  finally got there, grandma was reading this book. Now I didn't find this quite urgent so I told grandma and she suddenly vanished!. Outstandingly I looked in the book and there were sparkles and glitter everywhere. I hope I didn’t make a mess on grandmothers floor. “Ahhh”. In a split second, even just one blink I was there. Where you ask?. I don’t even know. It all just looked well, white. 

There was just a key. I wondered what it was used for because THERE’S NOTHING HERE!. I  walked over towards a black line and then something happened.  It was  like it threw me backwards. There are more things now and I think there’s something walking towards me. It looks like a killing tree thing then suddenly AAH!. To be continued…

Whaea Robs Feedback: 

An exciting fantasy filled with suspense that has me sitting on the edge of my seat wondering what is going to happen next.

Well done Kayla. I love the way you are using paragraphs. Great level three writing.

All About Me

Hola , my name is Kayla I am in room 12 at Waitohu school. I am 10 years old. my favourite sports are Touch rugby , Soccer , Swiming , Cricket and Baseball. I am thankfull for all my friends and family.